Comments on: In Vino Veritas http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas A safe place to dream Tue, 09 Mar 2010 21:07:43 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: writtenwyrdd http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas/comment-page-1#comment-1916 writtenwyrdd Sun, 19 Jul 2009 09:08:22 +0000 http://backspace.blog.me.uk/?p=635#comment-1916 I'm sorry, I haven't been to read the entries. There are so many it's daunting! I’m sorry, I haven’t been to read the entries. There are so many it’s daunting!

]]> By: Colin B. http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas/comment-page-1#comment-1910 Colin B. Tue, 14 Jul 2009 15:25:07 +0000 http://backspace.blog.me.uk/?p=635#comment-1910 I know but I can't do it! I've been trying to write it and it doesn't feel right. It comes out too fake and I want it to feel real so at least I can believe my story. If that makes any sense. I'll try again later. :) I know but I can’t do it! I’ve been trying to write it and it doesn’t feel right. It comes out too fake and I want it to feel real so at least I can believe my story. If that makes any sense.

I’ll try again later. :)

]]> By: JR Thumbprints http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas/comment-page-1#comment-1909 JR Thumbprints Tue, 14 Jul 2009 10:08:35 +0000 http://backspace.blog.me.uk/?p=635#comment-1909 Slyvia, (in regards to your comment @ my blog) Funny thing is: in this case it wasn't a bad review. I've had similar comments regarding knowing the outcome of my story. We're talking 250-word flashes--it's bound to happen. Also, I'm not sure I know what a "general reader" is. Jason has created a forum for writers to interact, and that in itself is worth participating regardless of whether I agree or disagree with a critique. As for that box of sixty-four count crayons, do I really have to share? Thanks for the link as well. Slyvia, (in regards to your comment @ my blog)

Funny thing is: in this case it wasn’t a bad review. I’ve had similar comments regarding knowing the outcome of my story. We’re talking 250-word flashes–it’s bound to happen. Also, I’m not sure I know what a “general reader” is. Jason has created a forum for writers to interact, and that in itself is worth participating regardless of whether I agree or disagree with a critique.

As for that box of sixty-four count crayons, do I really have to share?

Thanks for the link as well.

]]> By: Sylvia http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas/comment-page-1#comment-1908 Sylvia Tue, 14 Jul 2009 09:57:34 +0000 http://backspace.blog.me.uk/?p=635#comment-1908 Colin: two more days to submit! :) Colin: two more days to submit! :)

]]> By: Sylvia http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas/comment-page-1#comment-1907 Sylvia Tue, 14 Jul 2009 09:56:27 +0000 http://backspace.blog.me.uk/?p=635#comment-1907 I've been reading them all but I decided at the beginning not to leave comments. My kindergarten teacher's voice still rings in my ears: "I hope you brought enough for everyone, Miss Wrigley!" For the rest of you: <a href="http://clarityofnight.blogspot.com/2009/07/entry-7.html" rel="nofollow">JR Thumbprints story</a> I’ve been reading them all but I decided at the beginning not to leave comments. My kindergarten teacher’s voice still rings in my ears: “I hope you brought enough for everyone, Miss Wrigley!”

For the rest of you: JR Thumbprints story

]]> By: JR Thumbprints http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas/comment-page-1#comment-1905 JR Thumbprints Tue, 14 Jul 2009 01:18:17 +0000 http://backspace.blog.me.uk/?p=635#comment-1905 I've read 100 entries so far and I'm getting a little bleary eyed and forgetful. I see you've been steadily reading as well. Here's to writing & reading: Cheers! I’ve read 100 entries so far and I’m getting a little bleary eyed and forgetful. I see you’ve been steadily reading as well. Here’s to writing & reading: Cheers!

]]> By: Colin B. http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas/comment-page-1#comment-1902 Colin B. Mon, 13 Jul 2009 17:07:08 +0000 http://backspace.blog.me.uk/?p=635#comment-1902 That is so interesting. I need to find creative writing exercises like that and stick with them. I tried to write something for my blog the other day and it came out all academic and big-wordy. I'll try to find the time later to submit something. PS: Deep down you are a murdered. Hell, you're a serial killer! Admit it. That is so interesting. I need to find creative writing exercises like that and stick with them. I tried to write something for my blog the other day and it came out all academic and big-wordy.

I’ll try to find the time later to submit something.

PS: Deep down you are a murdered. Hell, you’re a serial killer! Admit it.

]]> By: Sylvia http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas/comment-page-1#comment-1901 Sylvia Sun, 12 Jul 2009 22:57:04 +0000 http://backspace.blog.me.uk/?p=635#comment-1901 <a href="http://clarityofnight.blogspot.com/2009/07/entry-66.html" rel="nofollow">Sarah's entry</a> Sarah’s entry

]]> By: Sarah Laurenson http://backspace.blog.me.uk/in-vino-veritas/comment-page-1#comment-1900 Sarah Laurenson Sun, 12 Jul 2009 16:46:53 +0000 http://backspace.blog.me.uk/?p=635#comment-1900 Yours is one of my favorites so far. So many good ones and very differnt from each other. Mine should be up soon, if it's not already. I'm 66. Only 133 words (sans title), but it told the story I wanted to tell. Yours is one of my favorites so far. So many good ones and very differnt from each other. Mine should be up soon, if it’s not already. I’m 66. Only 133 words (sans title), but it told the story I wanted to tell.

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